Actually, I do have one comment: in strip 3, panel 2, the "DAMN!" barely shows up to me - it was only on the third read-through that I caught it. I don't know if the image can be changed at this point, but I thought I'd point it out: in my opinion, a little more contrast might be in order.
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Date: 2005-03-21 01:39 pm (UTC)Other than that - nice work, both of you.