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Well, technically I'm a webcomics writer. But still.

Gossamer Commons has launched, officially. Greg's art is fantastic, Weds did a great job on the site design, and me? I'm just happy to be there.

Have a look see! This is a very, very happy day!

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Date: 2005-03-21 11:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] edg.livejournal.com
It's good!

(And I identify with the protagonist already...)

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Date: 2005-03-21 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dangerpest.livejournal.com
Outstanding. give yourself a tasty biscuit.

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Date: 2005-03-21 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drderanged.livejournal.com
Brilliant!

But must you use -5 point font on all of the information pages? :)

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Date: 2005-03-21 12:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dansr.livejournal.com
I like it very much! I relate to the storyline, and the art is lovely.
And it couldn't have started on a better day. Spring - new beginnings.

Mazel Tov!

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Date: 2005-03-21 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rabbi-thor.livejournal.com
I'd leave a comment, but...well, you're sitting right next to me...

WooHoo!

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Date: 2005-03-21 01:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] packbat.livejournal.com
Great comic, Mr. Burns! The script so far is superb, and Mr. Holkan's art fits it wonderfully. I eagerly await the creation of the forum!

RobinZ

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Date: 2005-03-21 02:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] freakfest.livejournal.com
Fabulous, sweetie!!! I'm so proud of you. *grins and kisses*

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Date: 2005-03-21 02:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] archangelbeth
*applause*

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Date: 2005-03-21 02:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] glitchphil.livejournal.com
Damned good.

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Date: 2005-03-21 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slog.livejournal.com
excellent, congratulations :-)

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Date: 2005-03-21 03:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pvenables.livejournal.com
What's this in my mouth? OW! OW! OW! It's a fishhook and it's attached to http://gossamercommons.com!

Well done Mr Burns and Mr Holkan, a beautiful start for Gossamer Commons!

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Date: 2005-03-21 03:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] corsetress.livejournal.com
Laughed My Ass Off ! (to hell with short hand on this one!) It is amazing. What a great start to my day. I have cross-posted this to my journal to those that are not blessed enough to know you.But they will. Hee he he. they will Darling. Safe journeys.

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Date: 2005-03-21 03:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] katre50.livejournal.com
Very nice work, I look forward to reading it. And, in order to assist that, is there any chance of getting an RSS feed?

Remember, webcartoonists: make it easy for me to keep reading you. RSS. It's just right.

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Date: 2005-03-21 04:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nvonflue.livejournal.com
Looks good, man!
but i'd suggest making each installment about that size...It's really an ideal length for it, i think. Just long enough to feel like you've actually read something...

Also, the archive link is screwy when on the creators page.

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Date: 2005-03-21 04:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] letiwolf.livejournal.com
Much yay!

A most compelling beginning.

(On a site design note, it seems you're using the alt tag for amusing commentary on the panels; if you want this tag to actually show up for all browsers, adding a title tag is good. Standards-wise, the alt tag is only intended to replace an image that can not be displayed for some reason, and a couple browsers treat it like that... which is slightly annoying, since a lot of people use it for captions. And of course, then there's other browsers that ignore the title tag altogether. Sigh.)

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Date: 2005-03-21 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nous-athanatos.livejournal.com
Nice! Final week of the quarter for me, so no time to dig in, but I'll be back.

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Date: 2005-03-21 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Nicely done. As usual.

Andy

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Date: 2005-03-21 06:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sonictail.livejournal.com
indeed, the art is awesome however I shall withhold for a few strips before putting forward a opnion. however things look promising! and please please PLEASE ask megs to center the page! You need your reading to flow and well, yeah, you may know what I mean.

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Date: 2005-03-21 06:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nicholey-2003.livejournal.com
i love it! outstanding job. i can't wait to see more =)

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Date: 2005-03-21 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] troutman.livejournal.com
Well, I'm not hooked. I have issues with the pace of things. If these four strips were updating individually on your regular schedule, I'm fairly certain I would've dropped it out of my bookmarks after strip #3. I'm sure the pace will start getting picked up a bit more later on, but as of right this very second, it seems like the title could be "Tales of the Mundane!" These first strips seem to be lacking in "the hook", that indefinable thing that makes me want to see what's coming up.

That said, despite the apparent dullness, the dialogue does sound good and realistic. Many a webcomic online has really stilted dialogue that reads somewhat robotically. Not so here. But in the end, if I have any real recommendations, it's to pick up the pace and cut to the chase (Hey, that rhymes! I'm totally putting it on a tee shirt now). Also, if the comic is just a slice of life strip about Writer Guy and his everyday life, I'm probably not your target audience anyway. There are people that love that, but I'm not one of them, so you can take my criticism with a grain of salt.

And even after all that ranting, I think I can safely say that it's superior to a great deal of webcomics online. Which just goes to show my relatively negative view of webcomics as a whole, but that's a whole other topic...

(And just like that, John's comics go suspiciously unsnarked for the rest of eternity.)

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Date: 2005-03-21 11:00 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Onzeker's cat needs a cast entry.

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Date: 2005-03-21 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shaenon.livejournal.com
Damn, is Wednesday available to design my site? It looks snazzy.

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Date: 2005-03-22 12:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] david-wisdom.livejournal.com
Happy webcartoonisting! I've looked forward to Gossamer Commons since its coming was foretold, and thus far I'm intrigued. And kudos to M. Holkan as well.

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Date: 2005-03-22 07:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] copperhamster.livejournal.com
Very nice, you've made my 'type in' list...

I'll try to remember to type in your url for the next couple of weeks, if you hold onto me that long, I add you to my bookmarks.

Yes it's wierd, but so am I.